"A touching love story that 'll make u cry"
10th Grade:-
As I sat there in English class,
I stared at the girl next to me.
She was my so called 'best friend'.
I stared at her long, silky hair,
and wished she was mine.
But she didn't notice me like that,
and I knew it.
After class,
she walked up to me and asked me for
the notes she had missed the day before.
I handed them to her.She said 'thanks'
and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her, I want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.
11th grade:-
The phone rang. On the other end,
it was her. She was in tears,
mumbling on and on about how
her love had broke her heart.
She asked me to come over
because she didn't want to be alone, So I did.
As I sat next to her on the sofa, I stared at her
soft eyes, wishing she was mine.
After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie,
and three bags of chips,
she decided to go home.
She looked at me, said 'thanks'
and gave me a kiss
on the cheek..I want to tell her,
I want her to know that
I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.
Senior year:-
One fine day she walked to my locker.
"My date is sick" she said,
"hes not gonna go" well,
I didn't have a date, and in 7th grade,
we made a promise that
if neither of us had dates,
we would go together just as 'best friends'.
So we did.
That night, after everything was over,
I was standing at her front door step.
I stared at her as She smiled at me
and stared at me with her crystal eyes.
Then she said- "I had the best time, thanks!"
and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her,
I want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.
Graduation:-
A day passed, then a week, then a month.
Before I could blink, it was graduation day.
I watched as her perfect body
floated like an angel
up on stage to get her diploma.
I wanted her to be mine-but
she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it.
Before everyone went home,
she came to me in her smock and hat,
and cried as I hugged her.
Then she lifted her head from my shoulder
and said- 'you're my best friend,
thanks' and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her,
I want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.
Marriage:-
Now I sit in the pews of the church.
That girl is getting married now.
and drive off to her new life,
married to another man.
I wanted her to be mine,
but she didn't see me like that,
and I knew it.
But before she drove away,
she came to me and said 'you came !'.
She said 'thanks' and kissed me on the cheek.
I want to tell her,
I want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.
Death:-
Years passed, I looked down at the coffin
of a girl who used to be my 'best friend'.
At the service, they read a diary entry
she had wrote in her high school years.
This is what it read:
'I stare at him wishing he was mine,
but he doesn't notice me like that,
and I know it.
I want to tell him,
I want him to know that
I don't want to be just friends,
I love him but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.
I wish he would tell me he loved me !
.........'I wish I did too...'
I thought to my self, and I cried.
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hello
awesome story...really hear touching n a fact of life....
Nice one!
Nice one!
its really
its really heartouching......................
This is how i feel about
This is how i feel about someone right now... we are so close.. ive loved her for the past 2 years since we met and im now 14 years old.. i dont want to tell her... i dont know if she feels the same.. but yeah this story can be very true in some cases
don't b stupid!
hey what don't you tell her i know it's difficult but if you really love her you should tell her cuz maybe she loves u 2 or maybe she doesn't you'll never know if you don't try maybe if you're too afraid you could send her an IM i don't know but tell her before it's too late. don't do like the guy in the story do you want her to leave without knowin' you love her and without knowin if she love u??
think about it
and by the way i know a song that's perfect for your situation it called "why don't you kiss her" by jesse mccartney
wow
i like it
been falling with no one to catch me
dear 14 year old,
yeah, even when youre young you can feel that way. i've felt that way since i first met her in 8th grade .. took a while for me to muster up the courage to even try to start a conversation - which failed terrible, btw. i'm 19 now, about to be a sophomore in college. we're good friends, and literally, i JUST told her how i felt .. not sure how she truly felt, but i'm glad i got it off my chest .. i'd do anything for this girl .. now she knows i'll always be here .. and yes, i do love her .. i'll even admit that sounds real weird and outlandish .. but you can't help it
awww
I also can really say this is touching cause I was in kinda the same situation. acuatlly twice i was.
I met my first best friend with 12 and he was 16 but since i was so young i never told him that i loved him and now that I'm almost 18 I told him that i loved him and he said that he also loved me. wished i was more brave back then.
my best friend right now.. i was in love with him 1 1/2 years ago and hadn't seen him for 8 months and never dared to tell him that i love him and then we met again 6 months ago and cuddled, then even kissed but now I have a wonderful boyfriend... but still kissing my old best friend feels right cause my heart tells me so.
you just have to risk things sometimes, start slowly with hugging and cuddling and if they return the affection you can go on if you think it's right.
thanks!
i really appreciate your love story,somehow we need to adjust if she/he is treating you as best friend just accept it because he/she wanted you to be his/her best friend in fact how can you stop your feeling and be told hey! stop this foolishness you re just best friend neither he/she wanted that relationship will last as being a best friend nothing more! somehow it happen to me i fell in love to my best friend but he is committed to someone (girl friend) he is my best friend since high school level until this time,thus he knows that i love him so much,but i cant do anything because i am also committed to someone but i am trying to make him my inspiration in my life,even though that we can make out (relationship for both of us) i accept it but it is so pain when the time that we are together sharing moments suddenly his girl friend will call him by phone and said can we meet today? ouch! he will just dumb me easily because of her girlfriend he love his girl friend so much more than me! i hope life i unfair lol..
anyway too much drama! tHANK YOU so much for that lovely and cute story...
I always believe that if a
I always believe that if a person loves you, regardless of how you feel towards him/her.. s/he'll lay out his/her cards and tell you that he/she loves you.. A lot of people are suffering because they lack courage to tell the truth and say whatever they are feeling.. It's a story that we should all learn from..
itz realy awesome...
ohh....... it was seriously one of da most fantastic stories i read .........
whoever u r - plz dont stop writing such stories coz dey touch our heart........
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